I agree with Neil. Moreover, the term infrastructure is used for things like highways, bridges, etc. It is a commonly used term these days.
CF
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Papers and presentations should be meant to educate, I wouldn't dumb it down, but rather use the term Network Infrastructure and relate it to our data backbone or nerve pathways or similar.
I'd push back on this.
Neil
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Hi Everyone :)
I need help with finding an alternative to the word 'infrastructure' and/or 'network infrastructure'. The audience will be healthcare 'C-levels'. I am told by my editors that 'infrastructure' and 'network infrastructure' are too technical.
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Art "for this I got outta bed? Hehehe" Bahrs
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